action to editing plan

There is more footage to come so to make it longer and the narrative understandable. Then we shall edit it to perfection e.g. quick shots and more dramatic transitions.

The sound needs to be adjusted to fit into the drama at the end we need to have music which fits into a thriller convention not a horror.

Response to feedback

More footage to add so it will be longer, soundtrack half done more to do
Add quick shots to increase drama.
To answer the question Lancia is in the house because that is where she gets kidnapped.

Feedback

Editing: Good quick cuts. good use of black screens, good placing of titles
Good effect of scream coinciding with the black screen. Too short.


Camera work:Clear camera work and helps to create sense of being watched
Panning round doors is good

Sound: Could re-record diegetic sound and include music

Mise en scene: Good use of household items e.g. taps
Costumes were good, kidnapper mysterious and dark
Good location

Narrative: It's good, contrast with safe environment (home) with danger