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Editing: Good quick cuts. good use of black screens, good placing of titles
Good effect of scream coinciding with the black screen. Too short.


Camera work:Clear camera work and helps to create sense of being watched
Panning round doors is good

Sound: Could re-record diegetic sound and include music

Mise en scene: Good use of household items e.g. taps
Costumes were good, kidnapper mysterious and dark
Good location

Narrative: It's good, contrast with safe environment (home) with danger