Teacher Feedback

I would encourage you to flesh out your blog, there are currently no student thriller or real thriller analysis on there. There are no costume, prop or location reports.
Your blog is the basis for your planning and so should be used as such, it should be bursting with content.
You also need to include a full shot list.
Your idea is good and your pitch indicated you have a clear idea of what you would like to achieve. You must provide me with details of when you intend to shoot at Addenbrookes, I have gained provisional permission for you but I need more detail.